Talk:Improbable Story/@comment-5206596-20130504024516

Since I can't edit this page for some reason, can you please edit this:

Trivia

- When it says 'Marvin is senn talking to animals', can you please change it to 'seen talking to animals'?

- Can you make Goofs and Running Gags their own subheading (change it to Heading 2)

Goofs (Once it is in it's own subheading)

- Change 'Why would Marvin give the MP3 player to Improbable Story?' to 'Marvin shouldn't have gave the MP3 player to Improbable Story because he's a horse, and he wouldn't be able to use it.'

- Delete 'The recorded version of the song with Improbable Story sounded a bit different when some noises that were there were not heard, unless it was edited.'

- Add 'You can obviously see that the picture of the iPad was a sticker. If it was a screen, then you should've been able to see a reflection of the screen on Teri's jumper'

Running Gags (Once it is in it's own subheading)

- Add onto 'Henry being suspicious when his parents ground him' by putting: 'and thinking that there are hidden microphones in objects'.

Thankyou so much! This should benefit the wiki!